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Post by blueberry on Jan 5, 2020 13:38:14 GMT -5
Name: Specklespot Prefix Meaning: speckle is his fur pattern Suffix Meaning: spot represents how the pattern on him is shown Sex: Male Age: 19 moons Sexuality: Heterosexual Rank: warrior Role: hunter Adopt Thread: n/aBase Coat Color: light gray Markings: grey bengal markings Eye Color: green Body Size and Build: average Fur Length and Texture: rough short fur Additional Physical Traits: digestion problems Health and Scars: wounded stomach causing him to through up a lot and visit the medicine den at times
[/font] Positive Traits: Quick learner, confident, companionate Neutral Traits: Pride, loyalty, Understanding Negative Traits: Temper, introverted, confrontational
Full Trait Description: he is edge boy and is very mean but he is also passive aggressive
Loves: being alone Likes: hunting Dislikes: community Hates: stuck ups Fears: battle Secrets: sympathetic
Strengths: hunting, hearing, smelling, stealth Normals: swimming, climbing, attack, eyesight Weaknesses: jumping, flexibility, speed, defense
In his past as a kit he got lost and injured and was forced to hide in a small crevice of rocks just on the outskirts of his home chasmclan, however the rocks began to fall and cut off his escape but left enough room for light, he was forced to eat different bugs and rodents even poison bugs which some times would eat the inside of his stomachs before they die causing his stomach to become weak and frail. He was found about two moons later by a clan member on patrol.
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Post by Owl on Jan 5, 2020 14:16:36 GMT -5
Hey blueberry! There's a few things I need to ask you to fix before we can accept Specklespot: Please format the title of the application like so: Name | Sex | Clan | Role (or Family for GlenClan) For the image, it is okay to use a piece of art for the cat's appearance as long as it use used along with an image like you have, though I am going have to ask you to make the art look more similar to the cat in the image. Please make the markings more regular spots like on the cat and give him the tabby facial markings, as irregular spotting like that sadly is not a viable cat pattern. You can also feel free to use an image for the application and when you draw him use an altered appearance, it just won't be his canon appearance. In the Body section I have to ask you to change the markings category to include tabby or bengal markings instead of "small patches of darker grey." You can say something like "darker grey tabby spots" or "dark grey bengal markings" if you like. In the Identity section, the Positive Traits, Neutral Traits, and Negative Traits refer to personality traits, not skills. If you need help with finding good words to describe his personality, I suggest a site like this one that lists a bunch that you can pick and choose from. Last thing I need to ask you to change is about the History. Only cats that are born in the clans can be made, unless you have bought an item in the store. It isn't clear that Specklespot came from a clan background, so please clarify in his history that he has parents inside the clan he is in. It is also extremely unlikely that he would be able to escape a clan's camp unnoticed due to the way that they are guarded, and if he did manage to get out he would likely be found within a few days if not sooner. He can become sick after eating bad food, but that would usually only affect him once, like food poisoning. What would most likely cause a recurring problem is for him to have a weak stomach from birth. After these changes are made, Specklespot will be good to be accepted! If you have any questions or need further clarification, don't be afraid to ask <3
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Post by blueberry on Jan 28, 2020 15:52:36 GMT -5
I can’t edit the image right now but I can remove it. I’ll fix the drawing after he is accepted. 😊
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Post by blueberry on Jan 28, 2020 15:58:28 GMT -5
Fixed 😊
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Post by Owl on Jan 28, 2020 16:19:30 GMT -5
Thank you for making those changes blueberry! However I still need you to alter his Past section to take into account what I asked in my previous post. I also need you to have the title of the thread include his sex, clan, and role. For example: Specklespot | Male | ChasmClan | Hunter
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Post by blueberry on Feb 9, 2020 17:54:46 GMT -5
I entered the clan onto the history
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Post by Owl on Feb 10, 2020 16:00:22 GMT -5
blueberry, I still need to to change the title of the app to Specklespot | Male | ChasmClan | Hunter If you're having trouble with that I can do it for you!
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Post by blueberry on Feb 11, 2020 16:08:46 GMT -5
Ok done how’s that.
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Post by Owl on Feb 11, 2020 21:16:52 GMT -5
Thank you for being so patient <3 He's good to go now! blueberry your character has been approved! You may now plot and roleplay with them to your heart's content c: Please add them to our Allegiances and post their name on our Used Names list if their name ends with anything other than -kit or -paw!
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